I bought an 
iPhone just weeks ago and the reason why i bought this particular is 
because that i was 
fascinated by it. Also this item has 
allot of applications that most phones did not have. This phone allows me to 
access the 
Internet with out looking for computer or 
raising to the library. my friends convinced me to get this phone 
because most of them had this electronics before i bought it. So, my friends were the once that convince me to get this phone.
 
What's interesting to me about this is that there are alot of smart phones that can do all of the things you mentioned the iPhone can do. That your friends had an influence is interesting. I wonder how the iPhone craze started. It seems like everyone has one!
ReplyDeleteIn addition to explaining what you bought, exceptional posts will include analysis of how the prompt--or your response to the prompt--connect to what we're reading and discussing in class.
If you haven't chosen an advertisement for your Paper 1 yet, you might think about Googling "iPhone print advertisement" and seeing what images come up. It's always best to analyze something you're familiar with.
More attention needs to be given to proofreading before you post. Sloppy mistakes like not capitalizing the first letter in a sentence will bring your grade down a little.
Grade: .8/1