Tuesday, April 26, 2011

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The two biggest issues had in my paper is that to separate the paragraphs because some of the paragraphs i mix them up and also i had some errors spelling and such as i spell this word mater and the correct one was mater.So i will fix my paper to separate some of the paragraphs and also in my paper i didn't include where i find the message that they are giving the advertisers so in my my paper i would like to fix that too.
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  1. AlyssaApril 27, 2011 at 6:50 AM

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  2. AlyssaApril 28, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    These are good observations. What I'd like to see more of is concrete evidence of both issues. For example, with spelling, give me some words that you spelled incorrectly, and then tell me how they are correctly spelled. For organizing paragraphs, give one paragraph as a specific example and show me how you would fix it. .7/1

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