Monday, May 2, 2011

Jeannette

Jeannette’s sister Lori don’t like Jeannette because When Jeannette went hospital and been there for a while her older sister Lori and her dad visit her. Jeannette asked Lori do you missed me and Lori said “not really” that’s show us that’s Lori don’t like Jeannette. How come Lori say that to her sister who in hospital? Obviously she doesn’t like her. Lori said “lot things happened” Jeannette was wondering what happened and she asked Lori “Like what?” And Lori answers it back “just like normal thing” and that’s another point show us Lori don’t like Jeannette because if what happen is normal things how she didn’t miss her.

1 comment:

  1. This is an interesting point. Keep in mind that these girls are young--only 3 and 4 years old. When I read this, I interpreted it as that life went on in the Walls household without Jeannette, which is unusual for a loving family.

    Also, to make this point stronger, use evidence from further reading to prove your point. One piece of evidence is OK, but if you have more than that, you have a stronger case.

    Make sure to cite the evidence (quotations and paraphrases) you have.

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